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Sean Ash - You Took a Piece of Me

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ballad ting yeahtales of loves lost and lessons learned

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LMFAOSounds like Jon Bon Jovi's aborted brother trying to capitalise on it's sibling's success.If you did this for the forum lulz, I salute you.If you're serious, I apologise for laughing, and wish you all the best in your future endeavours.

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LMFAOSounds like Jon Bon Jovi's aborted brother trying to capitalise on it's sibling's success.If you did this for the forum lulz, I salute you.If you're serious, I apologise for laughing, and wish you all the best in your future endeavours.
Actually wrote it for a friend that sadly passed away....
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keep it up bro :D u got any deals yet?when is ure next live performance G? may have 2 reach that still

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I like this, i think the beat is a bit weak (just the drum sounds really) but overall its a good song.

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the piano sounds to small, put a bit of release on it, or if it's a real one use which pedal it is that causes the note to last longer. the singing is pretty bad but i think that's a nice effect, kinda like when mike skinner sings and it's deliberately bad

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on that 808's n heartbreak sh*t yea??gotta salute the effort beat is f*ckin repetitive tho

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beat needs work, send the file to someone who would o produce with You.You got a good main piano pattern, but it should progress throughout the track. singing is bad, but subject to taste, i think there's people that buy music that sounds like that..

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