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I Was Cosigned

A poem

by Superstition

Huddled in the dim living room, back to the radiator

I take another gulp of my gin and Lucozade.

Add Reply.

Classic Black background, mercifully dark

Unlike the offensive glare of the hallway light

Frames my new offering

Suddenly, mind fills with regret and self-doubt

Will this contribution please them?

Will my composition

Agonised over for the best part of an hour

Be enough?

Minutes tick by

I begin to panic

Stupid, stupid. Why did you write that?

Is it too late to edit?

Too late to delete?

Has somebody seen it?

Has somebody called me a neek?

A fragile, twitching finger closes in on F5

Whatever refreshes

Pixels arrange themselves in the same patterns.

Disheartened.

But what's this? A reply? Click.

Eyes flicker to the new addition

Tucked geometrically under a quote of my post

It reads, "C/S"

Beautiful, merciful C/S.

Can the mind fathom two sweeter letters

To be bisected by misapplied punctuation?

Chest swells with pride.

Acceptance. Approval. Affirmation.

Deep breath. The air is a touch sweeter.

I knock back the remainder of my gin and Lucozade.

Retire to bed, proud

I was cosigned.

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I Was Cosigned

A poem

by Superstition

Huddled in the dim living room, back to the radiator

I take another gulp of my gin and Lucozade.

Add Reply.

Classic Black background, mercifully dark

Unlike the offensive glare of the hallway light

Frames my new offering

Suddenly, mind fills with regret and self-doubt

Will this contribution please them?

Will my composition

Agonised over for the best part of an hour

Be enough?

Minutes tick by

I begin to panic

Stupid, stupid. Why did you write that?

Is it too late to edit?

Too late to delete?

Has somebody seen it?

Has somebody called me a neek?

A fragile, twitching finger closes in on F5

Whatever refreshes

Pixels arrange themselves in the same patterns.

Disheartened.

But what's this? A reply? Click.

Eyes flicker to the new addition

Tucked geometrically under a quote of my post

It reads, "C/S"

Beautiful, merciful C/S.

Can the mind fathom two sweeter letters

To be bisected by misapplied punctuation?

Chest swells with pride.

Acceptance. Approval. Affirmation.

Deep breath. The air is a touch sweeter.

I knock back the remainder of my gin and Lucozade.

Retire to bed, proud

I was cosigned.

Superstition's f*cked, creasing all over again.

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i wouldnt beat tbh but shes in sick shape.

Madness at 72. Most 40 year olds arent looking that good. I hope im like this when old.

Just goes to show that if you keep your body in check you will always look youthful

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I Was Cosigned

A poem

by Superstition

Huddled in the dim living room, back to the radiator

I take another gulp of my gin and Lucozade.

Add Reply.

Classic Black background, mercifully dark

Unlike the offensive glare of the hallway light

Frames my new offering

Suddenly, mind fills with regret and self-doubt

Will this contribution please them?

Will my composition

Agonised over for the best part of an hour

Be enough?

Minutes tick by

I begin to panic

Stupid, stupid. Why did you write that?

Is it too late to edit?

Too late to delete?

Has somebody seen it?

Has somebody called me a neek?

A fragile, twitching finger closes in on F5

Whatever refreshes

Pixels arrange themselves in the same patterns.

Disheartened.

But what's this? A reply? Click.

Eyes flicker to the new addition

Tucked geometrically under a quote of my post

It reads, "C/S"

Beautiful, merciful C/S.

Can the mind fathom two sweeter letters

To be bisected by misapplied punctuation?

Chest swells with pride.

Acceptance. Approval. Affirmation.

Deep breath. The air is a touch sweeter.

I knock back the remainder of my gin and Lucozade.

Retire to bed, proud

I was cosigned.

Superstition's f*cked, creasing all over again.

:lol: :lol: :lol: first time ive seen this

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I Was Cosigned

A poem

by Superstition

Huddled in the dim living room, back to the radiator

I take another gulp of my gin and Lucozade.

Add Reply.

Classic Black background, mercifully dark

Unlike the offensive glare of the hallway light

Frames my new offering

Suddenly, mind fills with regret and self-doubt

Will this contribution please them?

Will my composition

Agonised over for the best part of an hour

Be enough?

Minutes tick by

I begin to panic

Stupid, stupid. Why did you write that?

Is it too late to edit?

Too late to delete?

Has somebody seen it?

Has somebody called me a neek?

A fragile, twitching finger closes in on F5

Whatever refreshes

Pixels arrange themselves in the same patterns.

Disheartened.

But what's this? A reply? Click.

Eyes flicker to the new addition

Tucked geometrically under a quote of my post

It reads, "C/S"

Beautiful, merciful C/S.

Can the mind fathom two sweeter letters

To be bisected by misapplied punctuation?

Chest swells with pride.

Acceptance. Approval. Affirmation.

Deep breath. The air is a touch sweeter.

I knock back the remainder of my gin and Lucozade.

Retire to bed, proud

I was cosigned.

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Superstition, surely the poet laureate of VIP 2?

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