First tune in ages

[Mythy Collins]

any feedback, also at 3:19 i think it sounds like another well known song but i dunno what it is?

http://soundcloud.com/harry_harry/sunny

[Beavis]

I like this, very different and happy. Couldnt tell you what other track it sounds like tho.

[Captain Planet]

55-60 theres a dissonance and it repeats, drums sound too programmed to be using acoustic drums, i think an electronic kid would work better.I like the arrangement but it seems things aren't blending to well, FL Studio?I think you're bridge/ending is hard though, there everything gels.

[Mythy Collins]

thanks for the feedback guys.taken on board@captain, using reason