Opinions on this opening sequence

[Supernova]

Part of a video/audio project at uni,

but we are considering using it as an opening theme for an internet series

Edit f*cked up the embed

[FamilyTree]

Yeah its good

only thing i dont like is the font you used for the names and the title of the show

[JGGB]

Yeah the N's are a bit unclear

[Guest Esquilax]

There's a couple of pretty clear 'N's in there if you ask me

[Flojo]

I think the colour grading could be better, it looks too washed out as it is so turning up the contrast to make the blacks 'blacker' would improve it imo.

Also because of the way you've got that scrolling cube effect it would look better if you changed the aspect ratio on the clips so there is no border between the lines of the cube and the clip.

I don't like the typefaces used but I get the impression you're going for that kitsch type look.