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Lens - Time For My Return ( Sci Fi / "Hip Hop" Instrumental )

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Has a chorus and second verse if You can bear with it for that long. considering making a through composed piece out of it for possible movie soundtrack type choon.but feedback on the current version anyway? :D

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Get rid of that padI like the chorus bit but without the padget rid of all of itand build a beat around that chorus loop, the last chorus bit in particularI'll even do it if u want

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yeh it's ok, vary the drums slightly, it sounds like a loop, u need to add the odd extra kick here and there

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yeah the drums are all wrong, has potential.

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