Trim- Notice now remix

[Mythy Collins]

http://soundcloud.com/harry_harry/notice-now

feedback welcomed like always

[Dubby]

It sounds like it hasn't been arranged properly to make the instrumental chorus drop with the chorus vocal.

[Mythy Collins]

there isnt really a instrumental chrous brah

[Dubby]

Yeah but it doesn't transition with the vocal, like your thing will start switching up in like the 6th bar of an 8bar vocal sequence.But yeah, I like the melodies. The drums could do with some worth tho.