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Lucarelli

Second Beat

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second beat i've made id just like to get some feedback and some tips on improvement from you more experienced producers safe

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yeh i think the link's broken

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that clap sounds out of time, i dunno if u put some kind of swing on the kit.... rest of it is sweet.

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very nice man strong emotion/vibe

i like the little subtle things

only thing im not sure baout is some of the hi hats like the little fast bits i can only describe as 'trap style' doesnt seem to quite fit personally id probably chuck a shaker on on every beat for the chorus chhh chhh chhh chhhh chhh chhh chhh etc

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something about the drums just isn't right. not so much the chorus bit, I get what You're trying to do there, but the verses,

try taking out all the hats for the verses, or maybe leaving one in.

and Your snare... there's space at the start of it, open it in wave editor, and delete the space

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