Guest Chelsea Jack Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 DO YOU THINK ANYBODY WOULD READ IT? If so, why? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dom dom bullets Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 No fuckin doubt 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chelsea Jack Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 word? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 born in the outskirts of the midlands a lost soul who was reguarly whipped on wild adventures from catching a train to france to her first girls holiday saved up and paid for by doing things un-civalised, the fun loving girl lost her way as the dark mist of love took her to her worst time tortured by a shadow as she slept as well a alive fearing for life as she tired to paINT ON A SMILE free from the chains she struggles to cope as the past has moulded her into a walking living timebomb u wana read?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JOHN DOE Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 Na. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 init i need to live more life first..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
local Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 that train to france does sound wild tho cuuurazy / yeah but it depends who wrote it n how it's marketed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
time_bomb Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 Yes, some arab 50 shades of grey, could get banned in a couple countries its too controversial Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Somalian Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 I am in the middle of writing the screen play for a story of my life, but I have not finished it yet because the ending will be me as some loser speaking to guys 20 years younger than me on an internet forum 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davicious X Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 How strong would the opening paragraph be? What about the opening line? How would you tell it? If it started well it would certainly help me get into it. Only five years old and already he had a full working understanding that, sure he was never foolish enough to believe that a bearded fat man in a red suit would deliver presents to the world each year, or that some bunny would bring chocolate eggs, what was the connection there anyway? But at his age it seemed almost cruel to consider that he knew, unequivocally, that life wasn't fair. He simply had way too much responsibility to enjoy things the way other children, even twice his age, enjoyed them. The magic and wonder had been ripped away before he had had the chance to truly experience it. Now, after the realisation of the falsehoods of that magic, there was just life, and it is full of disappointment. A child shouldn't know such sadness, let alone a little boy only just celebrating his fifth birthday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh To Death Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 No f*ckin doubt lets make history homie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Somalian Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 if it was serialized this is how it would read in the papers On the showdown with profit margins: I knew I had to show up I did not want to let the down the people who possed me. On his relationship with Jas and Mike Glourious My relationship with Mike became strained when he came out of prison and my bond with Jas was tighter than his On Eskay Jones I really like the bloke, I would shake his hand and show no hard feelings On Darren Gayle A misunderstood guy, I want to give him a hug 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chelsea Jack Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yeshua Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 No f*ckin doubt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kuffir Posted December 18, 2013 Report Share Posted December 18, 2013 I am in the middle of writing the screen play for a story of my life, but I have not finished it yet because the ending will be me as some loser speaking to guys 20 years younger than me on an internet forum if it was serialized this is how it would read in the papers On the showdown with profit margins: I knew I had to show up I did not want to let the down the people who possed me. On his relationship with Jas and Mike Glourious My relationship with Mike became strained when he came out of prison and my bond with Jas was tighter than his On Eskay Jones I really like the bloke, I would shake his hand and show no hard feelings On Darren Gayle A misunderstood guy, I want to give him a hug PMSL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalBawse Posted December 19, 2013 Report Share Posted December 19, 2013 if it was serialized this is how it would read in the papers On the showdown with profit margins: I knew I had to show up I did not want to let the down the people who possed me. On his relationship with Jas and Mike Glourious My relationship with Mike became strained when he came out of prison and my bond with Jas was tighter than his On Eskay Jones I really like the bloke, I would shake his hand and show no hard feelings On Darren Gayle A misunderstood guy, I want to give him a hug sdftgssdfs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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