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Hey everyone, I need a little help. I've written a chapter that I'm not 100% sure about, and I'm hoping I can get some feedback from folk that hold no affinity for me. That's actually really important here as people that know me that have read the piece may have been swayed just by that fact, and I want something maybe a little more impartial. I'd be really appreciative if you could give the piece a read and post your thoughts on it here. Whether they be good, bad, awful, dreadful, die Davicious die, whatever. All I ask for is your honest feedback on it. If something doesn't work, please tell me... I wouldn't mind hearing if there were specific things you liked as well, but I'm still Dav, so I understand lol. I'm off on holiday now so it'll be available to read while I'm away for the next week. I hope some of you read it, and I truly hope you enjoy it. Thank you in advance for lending me your time. https://1drv.ms/b/s!As8AkowXioflgewyQjDkMwlu4USuew Edit: Well it's posted now. Let the nervousness commence.