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So uh, here's the second thing I ever made, I'm not doing this for c/s's, just purely for criticismWhat could be added, where have I gone wrong, where CAN I go right etc etcDon't blame you if you stop a minute in or somethinghttp://soundcloud.com/moneyfight/flandcrest-enterpriseFeedbackkkk

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glass sound is random and amusingpad is WAY too loud, but i kinda see where You're goin with ituse more than 1 hi hat sound for what You're doing with the hi hats, rather than loads of the same 1and use a harder snare, and less distorted kick.

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I kinda like the distorted kick, but I see what you mean with the snare, AND the padI added the glass cuz it reminded me of Artful Dodger and Craig David :D

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I don't like you these days Sho, you've turned into a bit of a c*nt recently /Next one will have ogrish layers n melody lines n chords n stuffLike I said, coming to grips with it/ working stuff oot

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