Can i get some feedback part 2

[Mythy Collins]

Need some feedback on this please?

http://soundcloud.com/harry_harry/002-1

''nice'' break down at 2:29

[djbmc]

yeh i like that breakdown, comes in at the right moment just before it gets boring, dunno what to say, i can't think of any way you can improve it

[Captain Planet]

Piano sounds too midi, is your keyboard velocity sensitive?Bar that this is really good stuffpos

[Mythy Collins]

thanks guys/wow you got some next ears if it sounds midi to you lolmy keyboard is velocity sensitive, but i programmed everything in. aint touched my keyboard in years.

[Guest Esquilax]

Yh I thought the keyboard sounded a bit midi tooAnd I reckon the snare should be tighterBut other than that I like it, like the feel it gives, kinda reminds me of the desert scenes in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon

[Skola]

this is heavywelli dont like the drums on the main droprecon it would sound sick with the breakdown drums the whole way throughnice melodies and percussion feeling this