Feedback on this please

[Jefferson]

http://soundcloud.com/jephae/wetworkMy first real beat that I'm happy with.Not mixed or nothing so it may sound iffy.Feedback please

[Mythy Collins]

yeh this is a zoners, percussion is on point. would add a heavier kick drum and change it to 4 x 4 half way through.and when the bongos/congos first come in, that sound that comes in after them maybe put it a octave higher so it dont get lost in the chords if you get me?apart from that its sick.

[Jefferson]

Thanks bro :Y:I will build on it later

[djbmc]

yeh man, when the extra chord starts playing at about 1.25 have it drop into a 4/4 kick pattern, also have you got a sub playing the same pattern as the percussion? i think maybe that could do with a bit of treatment, make it stand out a bit more, and stick bare random fx and noise sweeps just before transitional parts of the tracks so that ppl know to expect something in the next 16 bars. It sounds very progressive mate, just a little bit more work and that's a f*ck*ng quality track,

[Jefferson]

cheers bro i will defo try and apply all this advice, cheers guise.

[Creed Diskenth]

Nice

[Skola]

aw yeah i can imagine a 4x4 drop would suit this nicelyvery nice

[Jefferson]

Got 2 new beats on the soundcloud. both working progress.http://soundcloud.com/jephae/vbbhttp://soundcloud.com/jephae/404-mellow-mix

[Skola]

not gonna lie on the first one i skipped thru lookin for that snare lolmaybe the intro is a little long? 2nd oneboynever heard cowbells used like that :D/seems like ur long intros

[Jefferson]

lol yeah i was going for a more progressive feel, although it isnt that progressive.Yeah im just playing around. not really looking to make generic type tracks, more experimenting with what i can do./the cowbells are sick, loving what they bring to a track./yeah whenever i do a typical build up/drop just sounds wack so i dont bother

[djbmc]

the first one, i think bring the snare in when the tune drops at like 1.26, make it bigger as well, add some stereo delay for a wider sound and maybe layer it with something elsethe second one is nice, co-sign the cowbell thing, adds nice a skippyness to it.

[cityofgod]

i like the drums and the chords. i would change the bassline so its different from the congos

[Beavis]

http://soundcloud.com/jephae/wetworkMy first real beat that I'm happy with.Not mixed or nothing so it may sound iffy.Feedback please

That is big

[Jefferson]

Feedback on this one please lads. I made it on my shitty speakers and after hearing it through a headset it sounds f*cked.Dno what it is, or what the correct musical term is but sounds like a low bass, and the hats sounds f*cked. Also need to spice up that drop sounds naked.Still un mixed and i need help on mixing aswell!http://soundcloud.com/4our/4our-reach

[Lens]

first time listenin at 4am... all i can say is it suits the skank in Your sig perfectly. will give feedback when awakereminds me a bit of dilemma, by so solid.

[Guest Medic]

Feeling it, good stuff.

[Skola]

nice vibe on this oneonly thing im not sure about is the clap, a bit overbearing? im feelin like a little short snare or a even a finger snap might go wellthis is listening on laptop speakers thjo

[Jefferson]

yeah safe skola, i will have have a mess around later on

[Beavis]

Thats a big tune, I like it.

[SPEAK NO EVIL]

very nice