slow jam opinion

[lilwarrior]

not completehttp://soundcloud.com/lilwarrior/slow-jam-previewnot really a beatmaker, but i try once a whilefeedback pls

[Guest Esquilax]

needs a nice warm bassand the snare is a bit abrasivebut i like itits mellow

[Black Ant]

i like this a lotlike esq said, the snare is abrasive also try put an 808 on the kick

[lilwarrior]

http://soundcloud.com/lilwarrior/slow-jam-editedwats dat sayin

[adjhasfdb]

preferred the first one

[Skola]

nicepercussion?

[lilwarrior]

nicepercussion?

thought it mite b too much, but i'll giv it a try n c how it sounds