Ashdotman - The Rain's Still Falling

[Ashman]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIw5l1XANI4

[Beavis]

Big tune, the beat is sick.

[Ashman]

uve got the right idea but delivery isnt there/its too much a bite of eminem

Thank you bro, however. I am nowhere trying to be like Eminem or sound like him. I always get compared to him but the only thing me and him have in common is we are both white trailer park trash. Nothing more.

[Lens]

beat - composition and instrumentation are there, not sure about the drumsverses are good, not feeling chorus

[Lens]

nah, Your chorus sounds like a typical Eminem chorushttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qzqn0ZOljEMhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vy5sfXW5UCg

[Ashman]

well, I never stuck on Eminem and thought to myself "hey, I know, I am gonna write a song that sounds exactly like Eminem!" On the contrary, I wrote this song with much passion as it is about an ex of mine and as I made the music I was just coming up with different hooks along the way. Haven't heard "careful what you wish for" but have heard Hailie's song yeaaaars ago! But anyway, thank you for your feedback - good or bad it's much appreciated.