Lens - Time For My Return ( Sci Fi / "Hip Hop" Instrumental )

[Lens]

Has a chorus and second verse if You can bear with it for that long. considering making a through composed piece out of it for possible movie soundtrack type choon.but feedback on the current version anyway?

[Captain Planet]

Get rid of that padI like the chorus bit but without the padget rid of all of itand build a beat around that chorus loop, the last chorus bit in particularI'll even do it if u want

[Chicharito]

Yo this would have the clubs bouncing hard!!

[djbmc]

yeh it's ok, vary the drums slightly, it sounds like a loop, u need to add the odd extra kick here and there

[Guest FA23]

yeah the drums are all wrong, has potential.

[Skola]

c/s CP tbh