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darkman

By darkman
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5/10 IMO.

S'alright, not enough multi-syllable rhymes. The guy spat couple words with good rhyming potential, and then totally flopped.

Example:

"See me , I'm tryna coming up with a mas-ter-plan/This a stick up dargy, put the mo-ney in-the bag"

Flopped. Could have put something like 'tell your dargs-to-jam", or 'you see the mask-on-man'

Man should have rhymed something else where I underlined. There's nuff more examples, but cba to break it down. It's basic foundation sh*t that any MC needs to know. It's been something people have been doing since like Rakim, Big L, early '90s day. Excuse my criticism, I'm an old school writer who expects a lot from any new rapper I hear, just the way I am.

Man fi check di technique, ya zeet?

Hang tight the 'country' man anyway.

Big up the Oxford dons doing this ting

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