Kim Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 looky miss why so down turn that frown upside down dont be sad please stop crying cos every cloud has a silver lining his right here his ready to care so take time to stop and stare he has more love than love can bare he needs someone for it to share 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 when writing lyrics, set it out like poetry easier to follow, Yours should look like: looky miss why so down, turn that frown upside down, dont be sad please stop crying, cos every cloud has a silver lining, his right here his ready to care, so take time to stop and stare, he has more love than love can bare, he needs someone for it to share / i recorded a song using the words stop and stare in a similar fashion if You ever intend to accuse me of piracy, let me know, and i'll up the song as proof that it's already done. / i like the lines i highlighted in red. would be more able to judge if i heard it on beat. keep doin Your thing though. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Sounds like something a pretentious teen girl would write 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Sounds like something a pretentious teen girl would write then she's bein real, alie? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reivax ™ Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 She aint right Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haze-e Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Sounds like something a pretentious teen girl would write then she's bein real, alie? Malika is like 30 bruh... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 This^ / It's not about rhyming down with down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 she was trying a double rhyme thing should have been why down rhyming with upside down, but i see the intention 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kurious Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 boom boom clap i aint elly man but I make the thunder clap call me hairdresser cuz u can get ur wig cap ur head -top -lef -flat an hes a dirty sket i lef him laying on his back - csi made me greasy, now i want a set with with matching t-shirts 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kurious Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 like M Geezy oo im on a roll tonight 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhiteTT Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Shutup u c*nt 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Infamous Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Shutup u c*nt lol is dat tulse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquaman Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 whoever actually spits u can pm me for bars serious ppl only tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Lens – Me at my Best Lyrics ( see video in my sig ) Verse 1: Your time’s up, I’m the news here, I’m waking up, I just slept for 22 years, It’s time to show the world I’m the best at this, I’ve just clocked how far that I can get with this, I’ll prove to myself that I’m able to sell, And won’t need backing from a label to sell, So I’ll only sign on the right terms, My name ain’t on the page until I see the right words, Until then, print my CD, got my own batch, Hit the road in socks that don’t match, See I can see the odds are against me, But that’s what makes me want this even more and it tempts me, They’re so quick to hate the best he can hope for is that they say nothing, No one’s gonna come out and say that they love him, They’ll hate Lens when he’s heard on a disk, But I’ll take my chances, the reward’s worth the risk, Chorus: I ain’t got time to breathe or rest, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, Which is why I’m writing bars, sleeping less, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, You’re whack, that’s why we’re getting vexed, And every tune I put out is me at my best, So You ain’t going through no, it’s me that’s next, And every tune I put out is me at my best, Verse 2: Let Your dreams die, I’m keeping mine alive, I’m dropping everything else and doing music nine to five, I work writing bars, great days in the office, And I’ll get further than You, that’s a promise, But don’t take my word for it, ask the beats, They’ll say the songs I put over them are a master piece, And don’t just believe me, go ask and see, I’m here in the scene and I’ll be the last to leave, I make a beat and it compels me to ride, And them times, I push everything else to the side, See I love this job, because I can work here in my bed, I can work without fear of the feds, Verse 2( Cont ): Sometimes I’d rather conceal myself and write, Than actually leave the house and face life, I just let the tune run on repeat, It’s over, when I become one with a beat Chorus: I ain’t got time to breathe or rest, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, Which is why I’m writing bars, sleeping less, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, You’re whack, that’s why we’re getting vexed, And every tune I put out is me at my best, So You ain’t going through no, it’s me that’s next, And every tune I put out is me at my best, Verse 3: It’s what I do, I write and record, I make beats, nothing else to do at night when I’m bored, There’s no telling where my tunes really can go, So I keep this vision, it gives me a feeling of hope, You say this is Your year, but hang on and wait, You said that this year, last year, and in O 8, And I ain’t saying You didn’t mean it them times, But You damn sure didn’t achieve it them times, I need to see this ( censored ) begin, The nights I don’t sleep are adding up I can feel my body’s giving in, But I have to keep writing, keep recording, On the hope that it just might be rewarding, Still I’m no star, Because I only spit what’s real to me and that means that I won’t go as far, But nonetheless I keep my head to the sky, Even if I starve myself of oxygen and I die Chorus: I ain’t got time to breathe or rest, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, Which is why I’m writing bars, sleeping less, Coz every tune I put out is me at my best, You’re whack, that’s why we’re getting vexed, And every tune I put out is me at my best, So You ain’t going through no, it’s me that’s next, And every tune I put out is me at my best, 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skola Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 T L D R 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 the devil has spoken, inside my mind ive just awoken im choking sit back in my chair im smokin 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kurious Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 ur jokin 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 kurious this aint a hoe ting, i suggest you go f*ck off,stop provoking Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kurious Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 u asked to lick me out tho u smut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 ....ok then in my defence though, i wasnt being serious, im sure it wasnt a pm, it was just said in jest.... like i would ever want to go down on a beast, if i want a man id get a man, not being rude, but from when ur calling me a smut or whatever its out of jelousy....imo that is. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 so i'm the only person to read Your lyrics, give feedback and suggestions and i can't even get a thank You? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 AM I THE ONLY PERSON ON THIS FORUM WITH A "THIS POST WAS EDITED BY LENS AT XX:XX AM/PM THING???? just seen malika edit twice, no sign of editing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 the first one i posted werent mine u know, i just liked them. the second one is though, and u dont need to rate i kno that line is sick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kurious Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 y did u edit smuttika Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Flat Eric Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 AM I THE ONLY PERSON ON THIS FORUM WITH A "THIS POST WAS EDITED BY LENS AT XX:XX AM/PM THING???? just seen malika edit twice, no sign of editing? trolls/f*ckbwais aren't allowed to edit without people being notified / gonna write a quick 8 bar about this forum / mike g has used a few of my lyrics i wrote for him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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