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So uh, here's the second thing I ever made, I'm not doing this for c/s's, just purely for criticismWhat could be added, where have I gone wrong, where CAN I go right etc etcDon't blame you if you stop a minute in or somethinghttp://soundcloud.com/moneyfight/flandcrest-enterpriseFeedbackkkk

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has more structure than the last one, but no substance

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Yeah, I find it hard to put other sounds in without f*ck*ng up the whole thingThat's what happens mid way when the timing completely f*cks up...

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f*ck*ng sh*t mate just a bunch of sounds chucked in for the fun of it quit nw if i were u

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Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen to

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Better than last time, the drum intro goes on for far too long imo and im not really feeling the drum pattern.I like the abstract pad, you are going in the right direction, stick at it.

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Cheers boss, I'll keep that in mind

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glass sound is random and amusingpad is WAY too loud, but i kinda see where You're goin with ituse more than 1 hi hat sound for what You're doing with the hi hats, rather than loads of the same 1and use a harder snare, and less distorted kick.

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I kinda like the distorted kick, but I see what you mean with the snare, AND the padI added the glass cuz it reminded me of Artful Dodger and Craig David :D

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Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen to
Bwahaha.Sounds very thin. You've gotta make it like an Ogre. Layers.
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this is personal preference for complex music and thatbut come on man make some melodiesintroduce some chordsmusic isnt just sounds layered on top of each otherr (i am wrong its 2011)

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Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen to
Bwahaha.Sounds very thin. You've gotta make it like an Ogre. Layers.
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I don't like you these days Sho, you've turned into a bit of a c*nt recently /Next one will have ogrish layers n melody lines n chords n stuffLike I said, coming to grips with it/ working stuff oot

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needs more cowbell

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