Guest Esquilax Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 So uh, here's the second thing I ever made, I'm not doing this for c/s's, just purely for criticismWhat could be added, where have I gone wrong, where CAN I go right etc etcDon't blame you if you stop a minute in or somethinghttp://soundcloud.com/moneyfight/flandcrest-enterpriseFeedbackkkk 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dubby Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 has more structure than the last one, but no substance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Yeah, I find it hard to put other sounds in without f*ck*ng up the whole thingThat's what happens mid way when the timing completely f*cks up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JOHN DOE Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 f*ck*ng sh*t mate just a bunch of sounds chucked in for the fun of it quit nw if i were u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen to 4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beavis Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Better than last time, the drum intro goes on for far too long imo and im not really feeling the drum pattern.I like the abstract pad, you are going in the right direction, stick at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Cheers boss, I'll keep that in mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lens Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 glass sound is random and amusingpad is WAY too loud, but i kinda see where You're goin with ituse more than 1 hi hat sound for what You're doing with the hi hats, rather than loads of the same 1and use a harder snare, and less distorted kick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 I kinda like the distorted kick, but I see what you mean with the snare, AND the padI added the glass cuz it reminded me of Artful Dodger and Craig David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Klitschko Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen toBwahaha.Sounds very thin. You've gotta make it like an Ogre. Layers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Planet Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 this is personal preference for complex music and thatbut come on man make some melodiesintroduce some chordsmusic isnt just sounds layered on top of each otherr (i am wrong its 2011) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lemons Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 Sorry, I don't make 'Tranny House' or whatever it is you listen toBwahaha.Sounds very thin. You've gotta make it like an Ogre. Layers. lulZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corrigan Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 IM FEELING ITits sh*t GOOD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skenghis Khan Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 PMSLur 'music' makes me crease. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Esquilax Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 I don't like you these days Sho, you've turned into a bit of a c*nt recently /Next one will have ogrish layers n melody lines n chords n stuffLike I said, coming to grips with it/ working stuff oot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djbmc Posted January 13, 2011 Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 needs more cowbell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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