Thizz Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Who's in?Has to be in a Haiku style. "Copped Tesco's Hot Wings Like 20 for 3 poundsate them shits mad fast" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest StabiloBossman Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Remind Me Of Haiku Style Again? Done It In Year 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunner Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Who's in?Has to be in a Haiku style."Copped Tesco's Hot Wings Like 20 for 3 poundsate them shits mad fast" Remind us of that style, is it 5lines or sylabels or something like that..? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superstition Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Three lines - 5-7-5 syllable structure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.Man Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 those green leaves dancing,brown against backdrop blue stilldance sing the viens green. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seriouss Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 0.man, you're a weird, deep f*cker but I think I love you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ego Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 its bare long rhyming haiku style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creed Diskenth Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 wot do u win??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.Man Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 0.man, you're a weird, deep f*cker but I think I love you.lol thats a dodgey compliment but safe@ego i don't think its meant to rhyme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thizz Posted September 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Seriouss will show you her minky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seriouss Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 I will, while he recites his strange, haunting poetry to me. He already saw it though when we lived in the forest for a year. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ego Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 nah i just used that word cah i couldnt find another to replace o.manjust cant "poem" in that style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.Man Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 the arrangment in haikus makes it suitable for a short transending observation, or statement. as it is very 'Final' sounding Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Van Cleef Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 bare batts . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.Man Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 I will, while he recites his strange, haunting poetry to me. He already saw it though when we lived in the forest for a year.fun times Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superstition Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Seriouss wants itBegging for O.Man, no shameHow unladylike. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colaniran Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 allow this haiku style longness..jus straight 16 Bars, no long.what's the prize? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seriouss Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Seriouss wants itBegging for O.Man, no shameHow unladylike.I was joking you big losey loser Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superstition Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 I was joking you big losey loser So was I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunner Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 allow this haiku style longness..jus straight 16 Bars, no long.what's the prize?Poetry, he dont want this to turn into a clash. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.Man Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Seriouss wants itBegging for O.Man, no shameHow unladylike.lol i just clocked, sick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seriouss Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 OMGJust clocked that was a Haiku!!Youre great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Q Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 not a haiku but mehIn Case of My Demise (Inspired by Tupac Shakur Poem In case Of My Demise)When Iâm gone I know it will mean my time will finally have comeEnjoy what we have shared and just remember I will always careForgive my bad and remember my goodIf I could have made things any better then believe that I wouldDonât cry or shed any tears, in the end whether my time is far or near it is what I have always wantedEverybody has a place and I figured a long time ago earth is not for meâ¦And I will look over to make sure all is okayAnd I gain joy from the fact I will still see you another daySo in case of my demise please donât cryâ¦..Itâs what I always wanted to beâ¦.a free spirit in the sky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest StabiloBossman Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 not a haiku but mehIn Case of My Demise (Inspired by Tupac Shakur Poem In case Of My Demise)When Iâm gone I know it will mean my time will finally have comeEnjoy what we have shared and just remember I will always careForgive my bad and remember my goodIf I could have made things any better then believe that I wouldDonât cry or shed any tears, in the end whether my time is far or near it is what I have always wantedEverybody has a place and I figured a long time ago earth is not for meâ¦And I will look over to make sure all is okayAnd I gain joy from the fact I will still see you another daySo in case of my demise please donât cryâ¦..Itâs what I always wanted to beâ¦.a free spirit in the sky.Plainface x 10000000 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dr. Doom Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 As I rest my headI lay down covered in snowembracing lord death Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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