Jefferson Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/jephae/wetworkMy first real beat that I'm happy with.Not mixed or nothing so it may sound iffy.Feedback please 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mythy Collins Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 yeh this is a zoners, percussion is on point. would add a heavier kick drum and change it to 4 x 4 half way through.and when the bongos/congos first come in, that sound that comes in after them maybe put it a octave higher so it dont get lost in the chords if you get me?apart from that its sick. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Thanks bro :Y:I will build on it later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djbmc Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 yeh man, when the extra chord starts playing at about 1.25 have it drop into a 4/4 kick pattern, also have you got a sub playing the same pattern as the percussion? i think maybe that could do with a bit of treatment, make it stand out a bit more, and stick bare random fx and noise sweeps just before transitional parts of the tracks so that ppl know to expect something in the next 16 bars. It sounds very progressive mate, just a little bit more work and that's a f*ck*ng quality track, 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 cheers bro i will defo try and apply all this advice, cheers guise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creed Diskenth Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skola Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 aw yeah i can imagine a 4x4 drop would suit this nicelyvery nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Got 2 new beats on the soundcloud. both working progress.http://soundcloud.com/jephae/vbbhttp://soundcloud.com/jephae/404-mellow-mix 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skola Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 not gonna lie on the first one i skipped thru lookin for that snare lolmaybe the intro is a little long? 2nd oneboynever heard cowbells used like that :D/seems like ur long intros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted March 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 lol yeah i was going for a more progressive feel, although it isnt that progressive.Yeah im just playing around. not really looking to make generic type tracks, more experimenting with what i can do./the cowbells are sick, loving what they bring to a track./yeah whenever i do a typical build up/drop just sounds wack so i dont bother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djbmc Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 the first one, i think bring the snare in when the tune drops at like 1.26, make it bigger as well, add some stereo delay for a wider sound and maybe layer it with something elsethe second one is nice, co-sign the cowbell thing, adds nice a skippyness to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cityofgod Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 i like the drums and the chords. i would change the bassline so its different from the congos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beavis Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/jephae/wetworkMy first real beat that I'm happy with.Not mixed or nothing so it may sound iffy.Feedback please That is big Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Feedback on this one please lads. I made it on my shitty speakers and after hearing it through a headset it sounds f*cked.Dno what it is, or what the correct musical term is but sounds like a low bass, and the hats sounds f*cked. Also need to spice up that drop sounds naked.Still un mixed and i need help on mixing aswell!http://soundcloud.com/4our/4our-reach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lens Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 first time listenin at 4am... all i can say is it suits the skank in Your sig perfectly. will give feedback when awakereminds me a bit of dilemma, by so solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Medic Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Feeling it, good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skola Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 nice vibe on this oneonly thing im not sure about is the clap, a bit overbearing? im feelin like a little short snare or a even a finger snap might go wellthis is listening on laptop speakers thjo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Posted May 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 yeah safe skola, i will have have a mess around later on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beavis Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 Thats a big tune, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAK NO EVIL Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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